Time has fled
Like it has to
Thoughts flowed
Dissipated to thinness..
Memory struggles to
recollect and reconstruct
The remnants of thought
Occurred back
To concretise.
Couldn't think of an apt title for this, though!
Thursday, June 22, 2006
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well...owing to the fact that I hardly get the poetry....this one's good..(I understood it)
It actually kinda says about everyone's scenario...
time flies by....and thoughts flowed(would like to know the viscosity :)), got evanescent..
but some memories never leave,the Happy ones, one can always reminisce about those old days forgetting all the relationship one shared with the other at that time,but now leaving behind the thought of a new person you knew long ago (I am sure you would have done it at the time you wrote these words...)
It did made me reminisce my happy days with my friends and brought a smile on my face too..
A sense of envisaged augury remained, made me wait for those moments, which were ofcaorse fulfilled, but yet hurtled through.
A notion this robust possesing a clairvoyance that does leave the ambience of the place making me loquaciuos and craving for more....
well...keep writing stupendous....
Thanks Yasha, you have made quite a reasonable understanding of the poem, and I'm happy about it..though, I must say, the "scenario" that I have mentioned varies from what has been percieved..
However, a nice comment, I must say..I loved reading through it!
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